Since Kaza is being closed down I’ve decided to put my thoughts about all the Key stories I’ve experienced so far (well I’m gonna try at least) and I’m starting with the first work of the Key team: MOON. (sorry Dousei nobody cares about you).
My first contact with MOON was while reading a VN review where the author hated it and said it was the worse VN he ever reviewed and for years I thought it was an awful VN…
I’ve discovered the existence of Tactics and that MOON was a pre-Key VN, years after having discovered the series. I was really happy to learn that there were more Key stories to read and today I love the Tactics VNs so much that I wish they were more popular among the fan base.
So MOON is extremely different from the others Key VNs, it’s not your typical high school slice of lice nakige but instead is a psychological horror story with a lot of drama.
Key is a series where every episode is different from the others and that’s why every Key fan has his favorite(s) episode(s). They can be different by their context, what they convey or in the case of MOON or Rewrite by being really different from the others and I like that diversity.
Most of the Key VNs start with a happy story and cute romance and you have to wait to see how fucked up and horrible the story truly is, that really bothered me when I was reading Kanon for the first time without knowing anything about the series. I like that in MOON or in planetarian, the sadness and misery of the story are present right from the start.
I’ve seen some people that were very surprised to learn that it was written by Key writers. I can’t totally blame them, it’s kinda hard to see how it relates to the next VNs but if you search you’ll find the connections.
Hisaya after leaving Key made almost exclusively dark themed stories with girls having supernatural powers. It was true for MOON CHILDe, the VN he co-written after Kanon, for his anime sola and it’s also true for his most recent work: Crystar (which shares a similar theme of cruelty with MOON).
In Kanon (spoilers), Hisaya made a story about two sisters, the older one denying the existence of the young one, that’s awfully reminiscent of the story of Yui and Yuri. Not to mention, Shiori and Yui both try to kill themselves at some point. For these reasons (and also because Yui looks to be more a Hisaya character than a Maeda one), I think Hisaya wrote the story of Yui and that it influenced him later to create the one of Shiori.
The story of MOON revolves around the relationship between Ikumi and her mother. And as you know it, family is one of the biggest themes in the stories of Maeda. (AIR spoilers) Just after leaving Hisaya and becoming more independent, Maeda made AIR which revolves a lot around the bond between a daughter and his mother (in all the routes of the VN).
One other big thing of Maeda we find in this VN is his obsession for alternate worlds. Here, the MINMES or the ELPOD are more oriented toward psychology than the earlier ones because they really are inner world (even if things like the Eternal World or the Illusionary World also talk about the inner emotions of the characters). Maeda made MOON after finishing his psychology studies so I guess that makes sense.
Oh and yeah, I also need to mention that Maeda wrote a horrific story after MOON: (a bit spoilery about Kanon)
(I don’t think the moon in the background is intentional but it’s still cool.)
The VN also include a male character as one of the important characters (the boy) which is a thing that Key will try to do more often later.
MOON is a pretty old VN and even today most VNs still need to have h-scenes if they want to sell but I think at the time it was even more important especially for a young company like Tactics. I think it was a very good idea of Maeda and Hisaya to integrate sex as an important part of the story right from the start to justify the h-scenes.
And so the story uses rapes as parts of the horror lived by the heroines.
And I think that’s the reason why most people hate this VN. I’ve read some pretty bad opinions on the subject, like that it was an insulting story for women’s condition, I think it’s laughable when you know the story and its writers.
But the focus on h-scenes was a problem even for me, I found that some ELPOD scenes were ridiculous, like the h-scene where Ikumi gives a fellatio honestly made me laugh. However, most of them were good. I think the psychological torture ambiance of the ELPOD is really well made especially with the Doppel-Ikumi theme playing in the background and with the great writing/VA of the character. This VN obviously has a big family message like the other Key VNs but I think the most original thing said by it is to accept our inner demons no matter how strange and embarrassing they’re.
I also need to mention the final h-scene of the Haruka arc which is the best h-scenes I’ve seen in a VN so far. The writing is just really good and it’s a really good combination of horror and love, two things that I think h-scenes are really good to convey.
As the h-scene progresses, we can feel the forbidden love of the siblings for each other but we also feel more and more the danger of death on Ryousuke. When we reach the climax, in place of an orgasm, Ryousuke’s body fell appart, covering the face of his sister with bloods. In his last moments, Ryousuke managed to free one of his arms to embrace her sister, a thing he wanted to do since the beginning of the scene
Sorry for the description but man, I’m the only one thinking that’s it’s an awesome scene really?
Another things that the game is surprisingly good at are the bad endings. My favorite is the lost body ending.
I was very surprised to go back to the roots of Key, in a horror story and still see a scene with the typical high school setting of the studio. I like this scene for the same reason that I like the Sayuri scene of Kanon 06. It reminds me that the slice of life parts of Key stories, that can seem boring, are what the characters treasures the most, it gives beauty and value to these parts. My headcanon is that the cameo of the characters in ONE is some kind of continuation of the dream of the lost body ending where they managed to escape in some kind of form the horror of the story.
The end of the game has a lot of good ideas. Like the depression of Ikumi which passes the time faster, the descent into the underground of FARGO where Ikumi desperately pulls beautiful flowers up, or the fact that Ikumi uses the MINMES to see the boy one last time.
But my favorite moment of the game is the confrontation with the director of FARGO (thanks machelmore for your analysis of it). It’s a moment of the game where I usually recommend people to not use a walkthrough and to “explore” the possibilities of this never ending nightmare. This thing made me feel like I was loosing my mind. It reminds me of the Silent Hill series where the evacuation of the reality is what creates the feeling of fear and uneasiness.
To finish, I would also like to share this really good MAD video I’ve discovered not long ago: https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm34360321 and to recommend to watch the promotional video of the game if you haven’t watched it because it’s really good (be careful about spoilers though).