You know what, I definitely remember seeing that scene. I guess I missed that the dad was the guy from earlier, whoops.
Haha yup, that’s a real line. Another gem is “Tomoyo’s tongue…is in…my ass. My filthy hole is being raped!” H-Scenes aren’t my thing in general, but that’s a whole new level of wtf. They made up for it with the one at the end though. It was tasteful, fairly well-written and actually served a purpose to the plot, unlike most of their past ones (like the terrifyingly rapey H-Scene with Nayuki in Kanon).
Definitely glad I read it though. Originally, I was gonna read it immediately after finishing Tomoyo’s route my first time reading Clannad, but I did her route second so I just decided to stick with Clannad. I’m glad I waited though. For one, it feels more “mature” than Clannad in a way, so I’m glad I had 7 months between the two to change and grow. I think the 7 month gap between me reading Clannad and TA is appropriate, seeing as TA begins ~6-7 months after the end of Tomoyo’s route. Also, despite having seen the anime, I don’t think I would’ve had the same nostalgia for the Clannad settings had I not finished the VN before reading Tomoyo After.
Also, I really think Tomoyo’s monologue at the end deserves to be held on the same pedestal as Little Busters’ farewell of the boys scene and Clannad’s field of flowers scene.