Seeing as they have now released the trial patch, I decided to give it a quick peak but I seem to have been unable to stop myself at that.
I read about 15-20 minutes of it (which I admit may not very much to form an opinion with) and came up with close to 30 instances I felt could be improved. I realize that this is only a teaser patch and still far from the intended end product but I figured I would share my current thoughts anyway.
I think the best way to describe the reading experience is “awkward”. The translation itself is fairly accurate in conveying the meaning, but the English used often doesn’t flow well. Maybe it’s just me being picky.
Regardless, here are some of my quick observations: https://imgur.com/a/abeP4Cy