We got a typo, my dudes:
silent”, rather than "Everyone fell
Even if you don’t include Saito, Haruka isn’t last. There are 10 normal competitors, so she’s second to last.
Also, “nick name” looks unnatural. I’m pretty sure it’s one word, and even if not, it should have a capital.
Goddamn, here’s another one:
This might be my mistake, but I’m pretty sure you don’t say “I’ve got a
hay fever”, you just say “I’ve got hay fever.”
Found a lot of little ones:
Bit of nitpicking, but this should probably say “the
three of them”.
<<Rank 10>> should have a space before and after it, all the others do.
“in the ground” should probably be changed to “on the grounds” or something.
Again, not sure on this one, but his gibberish is only capitalised here. You can see “Harya hore horeu!” lower, and most of the time the ones that aren’t at the beginning of the sentence don’t have capitals.
“parasol” is the only weapon I’ve seen where the first (or only) word doesn’t have a capital.
That’s it, I’ve put off reporting this bug too long:
Since I got the game, holding ctrl to skip past the logos before the title screen, and pressing start or load (don’t know about the other ones) with ctrl still held, makes the game immediately crash.