Aight, time to let the kittens out of the box.
Wow, such forced.
First half was super good, no complaints there, Yu being hilarious swaglord, pace was fine, sets up things all fine and dandy, I have literally no complaints about that. It’s after Yu starts running away that the cracks start to show and we get into that forced I was talking about.
“yo she went invisible”
“ACHULLY she is only invisible to you even though this information is irrelevant right now, but I must point it out so you can notice it is imperfect just like how you explicitly commented on my ability being, as it is, imperfect even though I have no reason to explain it in detail to you right now.”
Not even the slightest hint of elegance to that delivery, there are so many other ways to deliver that information in a natural way.
“omlettes are oishi just like mom DESU”
“Mom? You mean that bitch and whore who divorced and pushed us onto our uncle, as you would be fully aware, I, in fact hate her so much I only consider the two of us family”
“what about our dead big brother NANO DESU”
“he’ll show in episode 8 or so, shh”
“lol k DE GOZARU NANO DESU YO”
I basically vomited.
“im fuko now, it helps sell units”
ok this one is unfair
It’s likely a bit of pushing into a box too small, but even then, the way those two chunks of exposition were delivered was just terrible. Other than that, fairly decent set up.