Rewrite - Akane Senri Route & Character Discussion

No see that’s the excuse people have given me for this before(hurr kagari is flimsy as shit if it can break the earth dragon it can break her), it doesn’t apply here because:

Kotarou says several times things to the effect of ‘man I ain’t gonna be able to use this for anything else, oh well fuck it’.
Being so specific fits with the evolution thing going on, he was making the literal perfect counter to the Earth Dragon at the cost of everything else. Evolution cares not for unnecessary elements to the ultimate goal in mind, ‘cutting things that are not the Earth Dragon’ were unnecessary elements, trying to include them is going to slow the evolution down, a luxury that could not be afforded. Seriously this was such a cool idea and he FUCKED it in the ass with that ending.
For a WILDLY out there comparison, the utterly useless Pokémon Shedinja happens to be a completely perfect counter to the best two of the three Pokémon in the game, Kyogre and Xerneas, who never, ever carry moves that can actually hurt it. Shendinja has no place in even the most garbage of teams filled with crappy normal types from the first route, it’s that bad, but it just so happens to be utterly invincible against the kings among gods.
It’s like that, the Earth Dragon is Kyogre and Xerneas, the Blade is Shedinja. It’s it’s absolutely specific purpose.

I don’t know what to feel about this route at all. It’s not terrible, but it’s not spectacular either.

When I first played the common route, it was hard to like Akane’s character. She seemed to me a true witch, cunning, cruel, and sickeningly depressing to reason with. She was my least favorite character in the game for quite a while. Now…I still think she’s my least favorite character, but I do respect her a tad more than I used to.

I can see why everyone wanted me to choose this route last. Out of all the routes, this one feels the most epic, and by the end of it, many things change drastically. This route definitely handles the transition from micro to macro very well. In fact, if there’s anything this route reminds me of, it’s Log Horizon. Political agendas are everywhere, there’s a good deal of fighting, and Akane is quite the strategist (even if her decisions aren’t always the best). She really knows her way with words, but she puts herself down quite a bit. She was born mentally handicapped, and even after undergoing the process of transcription, she exhibits a lot of anti-social behavior and low self-esteem, which explains why she’s always so pessimistic and calculating. When Gaia starts crumbling after the Key’s supposed death, Akane’s resolve also crumbles to dust. She only finds hope in ‘Salvation’ and refuses to move on, which even Koutarou finds appalling. She ends up causing more long-term damage to herself in the end, and probably would have committed suicide if it weren’t for Koutarou.

If this route was trying to get me to understand what Gaia does and why it chooses to value the Earth over humanity, it didn’t really convince me all that much. By this time, I had seen the full face of Guardian through Chihaya, Lucia and Shizuru, but didn’t know much about Gaia until now. Akane’s semi-biased explanation of how the two groups think still leads me to believe that Guardian is the more honorable group. My reasoning for it comes straight out of my notes while reading this route.

[quote]A summoner’s power comes from the inner mind, working from desire. (Houjutsu?) The reason and intent used can affect the summoning process. A dissatisfaction with the world but being unable to change it becomes a dark feeling, a terrifying monster called a familiar. It can be strong enough to consume a person.

People who encounter a problem they cannot solve can instead improve themselves until they can solve it. The only person they can trust is themselves, and strengthen themselves until they conquer their problem. These people are superhumans.

But if that’s true…Koutarou has no business being in Gaia. Since familiars can’t change the world, Gaia’s cause is hopeless, but Akane also says that Guardian’s cause is also misplaced because ideals are unrealistic and are just a way of avoiding solving the problem altogether. It is a solid argument, but it isn’t one that exactly puts Gaia in a better position. Koutarou is the kind of character, in my eyes, that is more of an idealist and optimist that always does what is necessary to achieve what he wants. He works so well with people like Lucia and Shizuru because they aren’t willing to just let what people call ‘reality’ stop them, even if that cause seems hopeless. [/quote]

I wrote all that during the explanation in the first third of the route. Over the course of the route, Koutarou himself begins to doubt Gaia’s teachings, but blindly sticks to them until the bitter end, which in part assists in the destruction of the world through a forced ‘Salvation’. To quote my notes again,

[quote]Gaia’s summoners believe that since the world has rejected them, they decide to change the world to fit their own desires, which is just as unrealistic as trying to achieve ideals. Akane knows this, but she can’t do a thing about it because she’s in a similar position. She’s anti-social, [and Kashima Sakura’s memories make her depressed to the point where she intends to carry out Salvation herself.]

[Guardian wants] to destroy the Key because they would rather ensure that humanity lives on rather than let the Earth decide that.

So Gaia believes that becoming a wiser, more righteous people will help sway the Earth’s favor? I can respect that, but you’re doing a terrible job at it.[/quote]
In the end, Gaia is just another corrupt religion, and Akane is just the corrupt leader/final boss.

Since I’m around the topic, let me talk about ‘The Question’ from the common route. Looking at this from a different angle than what the novel presents us with, neither choice is bad. Choosing to change the world rather than oneself puts a lot of responsibility, but having the skill and dedication to do so can benefit many lives. Lucia’s recycling ideal is one example that, unfortunately, never gets touched upon in her route. However, choosing to change oneself is usually the first step to changing others. If you hate yourself and what you’ve done, how can you love or help others? How can you accept the love of other people if you don’t feel like loving back? Akane goes through this dilemma in the latter third of the route, where she has to learn to accept and atone for what she’s done before she can fully love others, especially Koutarou.

If I were to choose, personally, I would choose changing myself. Many terrible and frightening things have happened to me over the past three years: life-changing traumas, serious sins I had to atone for, and the growing responsibility that comes with adulthood. How could I stomach all this without changing myself? So, that’s what I did. I decided to learn to come out of my autistic shell, started working on non-sedentary activities (even though much of what I do every day is sit in front of a computer), and changed my outlook on life. Before I met you guys, trying to engage in conversation with others was a struggle (and it still kind of is to this day). I lost many friends through trial and error, and had to start from scratch every time I messed up. Perhaps my efforts ended up working out in the end…But I digress.

As for other problems I had with this route, I felt it was a tad too long for its own good. By the final third of the route, I was beginning to wonder when this route was going to end. The long period where there’s a huge focus on Koutarou’s actions and Akane is nowhere to be found is probably the worst part of this route, and probably would have been irredeemable if it weren’t the fight with Takasago. There’s a few other things I could nitpick about, but this post’s too long already, so I’ll spare you guys the details.

In the end, Akane’s route is a decent-enough bookend that helps set up for what else is to come. With all the character routes complete now, it’s time to move on to Moon.

If Rewrite were an RPG, would Akane be the final boss?

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There actually is a bit of Harvest Festa which is sorta an RPG, called Rewrite Quest.
I’m looking forward to it a lot!

Definitely. It feels like a grand-scale story that had bits cut out of it. It still had the feel of an epic series of events, but it somehow felt bog-standard.

A crazy religious sect ran by a line of insane women, forced into believing things and enforcing those beliefs. Meanwhile another side wants to get rid of those bad things, and just become a typical evil megacorp with some extra benefits.
I… don’t think it was meant to be convincing. I mean… Gaia was, for a long portion of the route, the enemy, at least, from the perspective of Kotarou.

I don’t think Guardian is any better though. They both do essentially the same thing.
One thing when talking about which Kotarou fits into, is that both Gaia and Guardian are extremes. Kotarou is idealistic about realistic things. Funny thing to say, but being limited to “change yourself” and “change the world” is a clever thing. If someone confidently picks one of the answers, then they are either idealistic enough or extreme enough to stick to one side. I don’t think Kotarou really cares about either. He just wants to keep some of the club alive.

Theoretically, a plan old normal person would be either both or neither. Capable of all powers or none.

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I have finished Akane’s route yesterday. There were some points I was confused about her route, especially the role of the holy women that the power of transcription was passed down through Akane’s predecessors and how she had tried to maintain her state of mind after what had happened to the world. The fight between Kotarou and Takasago was beyond excellent and I wished they a sprite showing what he looked liked but it was intense to the point that Takasago was beyond insane to the point of him taking ampules of poison in his system. I think Guardian probably had a role in this and that is probably how he survived back in the forest. At the end, despite of both Kotarou and Akane’s efforts, I felt really sad that they were banished from the same city that was created to protect humanity from salvation. Even seeing Yoshino, Kotarou’s teacher, the detective, Ansai, but Shimako surprised me when she spoke and literally didn’t want them to go. But, it was probably the better judgment instead of them being executed. All in all, I really enjoyed this route and it answered some questions as to why the Key was regarded to be a messenger for the Earth and how it was the will of the planet to decide the fate of humanity.

A fact which surprises me with Akane is because despite her role, she is often in the front line.
If we forget the route of Chihaya where she played the role of bad boss that Kotarou had to face at the end.
In the route of Shizuru, she goes herself to the side of Kagari when Gardian and Gaia trying to get her first and in her route, she is the first to join Kotarou, before the reinforcements, when he is still surrounded by Guardian.

Other elements that surprises me :

  • in Terra where she seems to be able to detect Kagari at least two times. When the Key was born and later, when Kotarou protects Akane against Kagari who want to kill her.
  • At the end, when she gives prophecies at others to find KotarouTree.

Perhaps it is the power of transcription which give her capabilities that normally belong to familiars or enabling her to remember a little of Moon.

First, lets get this out of the way: About the whole “blades that will only cut the Earth Dragon” thing: thats all just in Kotarou’s head, man. From my point of view he’s just psyching himself up. He needs to focus so hard, that it’s as if the blades were meant for the sole purpose of cutting the Earth Dragon. BUT THATS NOT HOW PHYSICS WORKS. If it can cut the dragon, then of course it can cut the goddamned Key. Just because Kotarou thinks it doesnt make it absolute truth.


OK, Im getting close to the end. This was my final heroine route.

Not sure how I really feel about this route yet, so bare with me. I think its in my top 2 or 3 for Rewrite though.

I’d been looking forward to Akane’s route, since it would be my first real look into the insides of Gaia. By this point, I knew Guardian well and sympathized with them, so I kinda thought that this might be where I sympathized with Gaia.

But that didn’t happen! To the very end, even though Kotarou is a part of them and supports them, Gaia and their beliefs remains at best a necessary evil in Kotarou’s life. Was definitely interesting to see why most of the people who joined did so, though.

It was also interesting to see Kotarou slowly adapt his thinking, at least on the surface, so that he would be able to support Akane. Like his argument with Nishikujou: not long ago he would have completely agreed with her. But at that point he seemed to have completely changed in order to fit in with Gaia. Yet he is still clearly opposed to sacrificing humanity in favor of “the planet,” as his thoughts and actions reveal when Salvation starts to actually happen.

This is probably the route where Kotarou matures the most, which I definitely enjoyed. We see him go past the tipping point and kinda loose it when he’s in the forest, as seen symbolically by the way his aurora suddenly turns into an “animal.”

The most interesting character in this story is definitely Akane. As often happens, my opinion of her went way up once I got into her route. She is very unstable, though. Her actions and feelings and demeanor are always changing. This can obviously be attributed to the magic at work, slowly implanting hundred’s of others’ ideals into her very self, yet still conflicting with what she wants to make of the world on her own.

There is something that sets Akane apart from all the other heroines, too. All of them seem to have some kind of power, each obtained in unique ways. But the other four each obtained theirs in a time of need. They agreed, usually begged to be saved, crying out for help. But Akane was always alone. Early in the route we see a scene that is supposedly one of Kotarou’s old forgotten memories:(Cue Radiance) “Was she lonely? Common sense would say so. Was she unfortunate? The very idea means nothing to her. She lives under completely different rules from us humans… Senri Akane. I thought she was going to be happy.” This is still one of my favorite scenes from the route.

There is definitely a theme of atonement. Humanity needs to atone for what it’s done to the earth. Akane needs to atone for what she has done to humanity. In the end, both appear to be relatively saved. But it still a bleak ending. Yami no Kanata e says it all: everything behind us and in front of us is darkness. We can still hold each other and enjoy the company while we walk along this path, but we are heading towards the end.

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Is it just me or does this short clip feel like it can totally belong in a live action sequence of Akane’s route? :stuck_out_tongue:

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Man, that shit was amazing. It really got under my skin, no pun intended. Though when you present it like that, you should just post in the Akane topic instead.

Edit: Thanks Aspi.

Thats true. I totally forgot we had an Akane discussion page.

Man I thought a lot of people died in Lucia’s route…

I’m really mixed about this one. On one hand it was really nice seeing Kotarou develop in a a completely different way than he did in other routes, but this route had a lot of weak spots.

This route set up some parallels between Suzaki + Kotarou and Sakura + Akane but then they didn’t really do a whole lot with it. They could have used it to build more tension between Kotarou and Akane but they’re just like “ah fuck it they’ll stay together forever.” Kotarou is far too adamant about staying with Akane. I loved the scene on the roof where Akane asks if she’s changed and Kotarou lies saying she hadn’t. It would have been amazing to see Kotarou and Akane struggle with what should be an existential crisis, but no, they drop it after a scene. I also feel like the writing in general here is lower quality than other routes.

I know that fire-mine thing was almost certainly placed by Takasago, but I want to believe it was Fuego just so this route has some connection to Chihaya’s. I really dislike how this route threw away all of the other characters and introduced several spriteless characters.

OK, I know that this is a really unreasonable complaint, so much so that I deeply debated even including it, but look at this CG real quick


WHY IS THERE NO VERSION WITH THEM HOLDING HANDS.
Its perfectly set up for it! Look at it! Look at the way Kotarou is curving his fingers! Perfect hand holding shape, and his arm is the appropriate distance. It might be because we didn’t really see their practically nonexistent relationship so I was itching for a fix of cuteness, but I really let this bother me for some reason…

Eh, well on to Moon.

In my opinion, there are two reasons why it was written in the way it was, instead of like you’re suggesting:

  1. Part of the “point” of the story was that, while the whole “Holy Woman” thing has been going on for… a long time, and it has caused relationships and circumstances like that of Sakura and Suzaki, Akane is not Sakura, and Kotarou is not Suzaki, and Kotarou devotes himself to making it so his and Akane’s lives will not have to be repeats of what has happened so many times before.

  2. The circumstances are a bit… different this time around. You know, with the whole Destruction thing. Basically, from my perspective, they’re both gonna die at some point, probably pretty soon, and they know it. Kotarou is trying to keep hold of the one thing he really has left that he loves. After all, he kinda dropped out of school and devoted his life to her.

I hope you enjoy Moon a bit more though. Its a doozie.

That’s probably because this route was supposed to be longer than what it currently is.

I know Kanon has been heavily criticizing this part of Akane Route, but let me address the point of that Kotarou vs. Earth Dragon, and why Kotarou’s attack, which was explicitly described to be specifically designed to kill the Earth Dragon, but ended up killing the Key instead. This kinda flashed in my mind after writing about the anime and what I thought it was trying to do, but I tend to forget… and then there’s hell week. Yeah.

I did mention that one of the visual novel’s theme, as laid bare by the end of Terra Arc, is addressing humanity’s tendency to fixate too much on short-term goals that they fail to go after the more important long-term goals instead. In Terra, this manifests as humanity’s fixation in keeping the Earth for survival’s sake, as opposed to finding opportunities beyond the planet and carve their future even without it.

This theme also manifests in this scene: surely the former is represented by Kotarou’s fixation in defeating the Earth Dragon. But his goal is to reach Akane and release her from the chains of the Holy Women’s desire for Salvation. With that, he must stop the world from ending, and this represents the latter. I’d also like to think that the the Dragon symbolized the obvious distance between Kotarou and Akane, but the barrier isn’t the only problem here; it’s the Key, which I’d also like to think of this to be the manifestation of that desire.

While fighting against the Earth Dragon, which is extremely difficult to defeat unless he pushed himself beyond his current (at that time) limit, he became too focused in finding ways to defeating it, evolving his blades to the point that it could only slice through the Earth Dragon alone. But defeating it won’t stop Akane from successfully carrying out Salvation; it will only, at most, break the physical barrier between the pair.

Perhaps the blow he received from the Dragon snapped some sense into him, or maybe the short dialogue between him and Akane put him back to his rails, it’s not clear, but he may have realized that the Earth Dragon isn’t his target. It’s whatever putting the world to its end, and the existence that which chained Akane to orchestrating Salvation – the Key. (That, or Tanaka is just fooling us around haha.)

Remember how familiars feed on their summoners’ desire to see the world change? Well, the Earth Dragon is the Holy Disciples’ familiar. When the Key died, their means of carrying out that change faded into air, and perhaps along with it, their desire for change also dissipated. They have also been greatly exhausted of life, so, the Dragon died along with the Disciples.

By the end, he was unable to save the Disciples, but Kotarou was at least able to save Akane, stopping her from being dragged along by the aforementioned chains. It may be badly-written, or not, but I’d like to think that it makes thematic sense regardless.


On another hand, I disagree that Akane Route lacked romance. If there are expectations for some cute sweet romantic interaction from this route, akin to (another Rewrite route) Lucia’s, this is seriously bound to be disappointing.

Romantic relationships can come in many forms, and Kotarou and Akane’s relationship is particularly mature, sensual, and also very subtle, which suits her just right. This can be seen in much of Kotarou’s actions, in Akane’s expressions, and basically the fact that Kotarou has become a part of Akane’s private life – they share the same room! But at the same time, their romance is also distant, and that’s largely because of their positions in the story.

The last CG may not have had them explicitly holding hands, but that gaze. The way they look at each other man. Their gaze so sensual that I might faint.

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I liked the Akane route a lot as a whole, but a certain part of it made me really sick to my stomach.

It was at the point when the survivors of humanity had finished evacuating into the city of stone and began to settle in. I wholeheartedly hate everything that happened starting from that point, except for the moment when Shimako spoke. That one thing really gave me the feels.

Anyway, I had the feeling that Tanaka was worming his way into my head, trying to push his opinions and ideals onto the reader, filling a game with things that did not belong there.
Things like what kind of government an advanced society should have, that capital punishment is wrong, etc.

But the most unforgivable thing was what Tanaka did to Yoshino. I have mentioned it on a different topic:

Sure, Yoshino’s “lone wolf” chuunibyou was pretty childish, but what I always respected about him was that he stayed true to his ideals at all times, always kept using his own head, never succumbing to the hivemind, no matter who or what he would have to oppose. He was an individual through and through. But Tanaka destroyed all of it, calling it “growing up”.

I talked to Aspi about it shortly after joining Kaza and I believe I’ve discussed it with some other members as well, but I’m not sure if it was on the forums or the chat.

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Meanwhile, I’d argue otherwise, and will say that there’s nothing much wrong with the route being blatant about the writer’s worldview :))

There are writers who indeed write to move forward an advocacy. Typically, this is because of their desire for societal change, and refusal to write what is called “masturbatory writing,” a.k.a. writing for the sake of it (in art, art for art’s sake).

And that’s just fine. Some of the most well-known literary works intended to move forward an advocacy. An example close to me – and funny enough today is Int’l Human Rights Day – would be Dekada '70, an award-winning novel in the 80’s critiquing Martial Law and of Marcos Dictatorship in the Philippines, and man it’s not subtle about it: the story even had a scene where one of the characters got arrested for apparently possessing drugs, and was later found to be extra-judicially killed, and the police wasn’t too keen on investigating on it, so his parents were decidedly angry about it.

With that said, the themes of Akane route (and Rewrite in general for the matter) is about life. The talks on capital punishment was apt in the story, mainly because Kotarou, as much as he wanted Akane and himself to atone, didn’t want to die. Perhaps Tanaka was just being obvious that he didn’t like it.

And while there are indeed some things that I don’t much with Rewrite, personally, it’s just fine for stories to want to advocate on something. Akane route didn’t really bother me because the message wasn’t really repulsive to me by nature. (Tbh, I’ve seen more stories more blatant about their advocacies than this route.)

Can’t comment much on Yoshino though.

(Also, all works of art, including literature, are all products of their artists’ worldview, and therefore, carry a message that they want to send. And yes, that includes all Key works. Planetarian, for instance, wanted us to find hope in bleak circumstances. I guess part of why you didn’t like those scenes from Akane can either be because you disagree on it, or because you didn’t want stories to delve in politics. Which is fine, though I beg to differ.)

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Any insights on what happened to the other heroines or guardian in this route?

I suppose its possible (Shizuru Spoilers)Lucia and Shizuru ended up in the bunker that was in Shizuru’s route and they avoided Salvation but for the most part I think everyone who didn’t make it to the gray city died / re-evolved. But its been a while since I read it.

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How is Koutarou still alive despite the key getting killed? Based on Kotori’s route, shouldn’t Koutarou drain life from
Kotori (who might be dead from salvation) if the key died? But I guess the last familiar bird helping Koutarou evacuate citizens is from Kotori, so she could still be alive in the city of stone somewhere
.

This is based on my memory of Kotori’s route from nearly two years ago (there’s a reason I haven’t reread it but I won’t get into it here), but if I recall correctly, that’s explained properly.

Kotori spoilers:

Kotarou doesn’t start to die when the Key dies, but basically when the earth finds out about the Key’s death. In Kotori’s route, the Key dies in the middle of an open field on the ground, so before her body even touches the ground, the earth “knows” that she’s dead. But if she was killed in a different environment - I believe Kotarou uses a concrete room as an example - the earth has no way of knowing that she’s dead, at least for a while. The place the Key actually dies in Akane’s route is:


Where there’s absolutely no way for the earth to know about the Key’s death. We don’t know what happens to the Key’s body afterwards, but Kotori’s solution of killing the Key in her route so Kotarou and herself can live on implies that she does have a permanent solution that would allow Kotarou to live on even once the earth knows of the Key’s death.

I do agree with the idea that Kotori was probably alive until at least after the Key’s death, though I’m not sure about her reaching the City of Stone.

Also, once the earth finds out about the Key’s death, it’s not Kotarou that is in the most danger of dying, but Kotori. The reason he ends up the one who nearly dies in her route is because he convinces her to cut their contract so that he would stop siphoning energy out of her. It’s likely that if she doesn’t cut the contract, he would survive by sucking her life energy. She may well have chosen to sacrifice herself in Akane’s route and not cut the contract, having pretty much lost her reason for living anyway and in order to save Kotarou. Of course, this is assuming it’s even necessary for her to do so, which we don’t know it is. As I said: “Kotori’s solution of killing the Key in her route so Kotarou and herself can live on implies that she does have a permanent solution that would allow Kotarou to live on even once the earth knows of the Key’s death” so she probably doesn’t even need to go that far. But, if all else failed, this would still explain it.

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