This doesn’t really look good, like at all. I think that a lot of the strengths of Hinoue Itaru’s later work for Key was the way she colored everything. It made the character designs look a hell of a lot better and more modern, but here, it doesn’t seem like she’s showing off her full potential. I understand that a more colorful artstyle is probably a part of the game’s core aesthetic, but there are much better ways to do colorful than this. Look at VNs like Anata ni Koi Suru Ren’ai Recette or anything by Alcot. They know how to do a colorful artstyle while still making it appealing, but here it feels like all the color choices were an afterthought to the base character designs, so the characters just look odd.
In the story department, this game also looks like it’d be an absolute wreck. It’s scenario writer has written some nukige and has done no significant work that anybody has really ever liked. Mangagamer has also already admitted that they’re essentially making the VN by using all the feedback they got at conventions, and making it appeal to the widest audience possible. I think there’s probably millions of examples of this kind of model failing, and when you have a writer who is already not very good, it’s a recipe for disaster.