My issue with this episode, and so far this show in general is consistency, or lack thereof. There are a lot of areas where this show falls short. For one there is tone. The show’s tone is really weird and hard to find. Look at Kanon (both versions), Clannad, and even Angel Beats. Between all the funny, sad, heavy, and lighthearted parts, each show had it’s own unique atmosphere. When I think Kanon, I think the snow-covered train station with the song “Yakusoku” playing in the back. When I think Clannad, I see Hikarizaka High School and the Cherry Blossom path during and orange sunset while “Town, Flow of Time, People” plays. When I think Charlotte, I don’t really have that sort of image, yet with past Key works I definitely had it well before the 1/3 point in the series.
When it comes to characters, I’m still trying to figure out who the protagonist is. Yes we sometimes get some inner monologue from Yu, but he’s what I call a “lazy observer.” He tells the viewer exactly what’s happening without any interesting commentary. Also, notice that all his unique character traits magically disappear after episode 1. He effectively goes from quippy asshole who stages a fucking car crash to try and “get some” to “Yuuichi in Kanon 2002” tier observer with the personality of toasted cardboard. The only real purpose he serves is that of a vessel that viewers can put themselves in the shoes of, which causes him to lose any individuality.
Then we have characters like Joujiro and Yusa/Misa. Joujiro is supposed to be comic relief, but seeing as that is literally all he does, he doesn’t feel like a person. Yusa and Misa are both opposite extremes in one dimension. Yusa is bubbly and and Misa is angry. The end of episode three, while very forced, gave me hope that Misa would have some more substance, but sadly this episode reverted her back to Angry McYellingpants.
The only character that interests me is Nao. She’s shown herself to be tactful and recorceful, as well as a master interrogator. She has a past which motivates her to help other people and still has a mysterious side. She’s the only character that feels really fleshed out.
My issue with this episode is that it marks the 1/3 point of the show, and nothing has happened. If this were a standard slice of life show, or if it were more than 13 episodes, this episode would be a fine break from the plot, but right now there is none. There is no plot or central conflict, only one of the four main characters has a personality, and she’s not even the “protagonist.” Angel Beats may’ve had filler like this, but the main plot and conflict (Angel and God are mean, Otonashi lost his memory) are established before the credits even roll for episode 1. I’m sticking with this show to the end and giving it the benefit of the doubt, but right now I’m worried about its path.
This is like Key’s “The Phantom Menace.” It’s the first new Key work to air after me discovering Key and therefore the first I can watch “live”, just as TPM was the first new Star Wars film in many fans’ lifetimes, making it the first they could see in theaters. Both Charlotte and TPM lack a protagonist, and they both lack well rounded characters (for example, give me three character traits for Leia, and three for Amidala. Now give me three for Tomoya and three for Yu. Harder than you thought for the latter in each, huh?). As of right now, they both lack a plot too. I REALLY hope Key can pick things up.
[Note: This is just my opinion. If you disagree that’s cool, I’m not mad. Just thought I’d share and maybe spark some discussion]