Key Fanfiction!

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9119602/1/Sandwich-Chronicles

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You make a podcast for your fan-fiction.
Thatā€™s genius.

Gotta try that.

Iā€™m not Chika Shirokiri or Jun Maeda either, but a couple users on Kaza gave me inspiration for a Little Busters! fic about little Kudryavka. With encouragement, I wrote a short one-shot with a unique twist. What is this incredibly interesting twist, you ask? Check the link below.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11772252/1/Wafuu-The-Reaper

Itā€™s not as grandiose as my earlier Rewrite fanfic, but if you want a short, fun story about a theoretical ā€˜dark sideā€™ to Kud, look no further. Donā€™t ask me when it happens, though. I couldnā€™t tell you. :stuck_out_tongue:

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Have you read Messiah, my Rewrite fanfiction that I created a while back? Did you think Imako should have ended up with Chizuru instead of Hitomi? Do you wish you knew more about Chizuru as a character? Look no further!

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11906511/1/Messiah-Plus

Messiah+ (written as Plus because Fanfiction.net doesnā€™t take symbols for whatever reason) is a direct continuation to Messiah that asks that you completely forget (but not quite) what happened in the original and goes in a new direction. Itā€™s also an experiment for a useful technique I found in a writing self-help book recently, so I hope the result turns out quite nicely. Chapter 1 is currently up, so enjoy~! :smile:

Since I play a lot of games, Iā€™ve started to do screenshot-based Letā€™s Plays. I use a Planetarian name a lot so that leads to a lot of scenarios, one Iā€™m debating is writing one as a fake biopic of if Yumemi was a revered driver or pilot or something she would be terribly ill-suited for.

Basically, if some people call Yumemi a sort of robot Jesus, when I was first writing stuff I ended up turning her into a robot Ayrton Senna, which depending on your point of view isnā€™t too far off. Considering the renewed attention Planetarianā€™s been getting recently I thought it would be appropriate.

There was another one thatā€™s ongoing in which Iā€™m taking robots compelled to follow Yumemi to conquer space, itā€™s a Master of Orion runā€¦

Long story short Iā€™ve tossed around the idea of putting her in many, many places and I wonder if itā€™s time to come back to that. And if so, how?

Remember the AIR beach episode I wrote for the AIR Bookclub? I wrote a spiritual successor to it! This time around itā€™s about a spring picnic, or rather, finding someone whoā€™s supposed to be there for the picnic. There are mild spoilers for Kanon, particularly Sayuriā€™s mini-route if you havenā€™t read that, so be cautious.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12013759/1/Kanon-The-Picnic-Episode

Enjoy~! :slight_smile:

Although I posted it in the Tomoyo After Fanart thread first, Iā€™m going to place my fanfic here and update it when I write a new chapter.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12138063/1/Letters-To-Papa-A-Tomoyo-After-Fanfic

So far thereā€™s only one chapter up, with four more on the way. I donā€™t know how many more Iā€™m going to write, if I write any more at all after the Bookclub. Nevertheless, itā€™s something I can comfortably do while working on my other projects.

Again, Tomo Arc and After Arc spoilers for the uninitiated. Please read Tomoyo After, itā€™s a great visual novel. And donā€™t forget to read this afterward! Enjoy~ :3

Thereā€™s some supplemental dialogue below with Tomoya and Tomoyo accompanying each letterā€™s release. Again, After Arc spoilers.

EDIT (09/07/16) - ā€œOh, another letter? ā€¦Whoā€™s Tomo?ā€ 0_o

EDIT (09/09/16) - ā€œTomoya, this letter is from Tomo, ourā€¦our friend.ā€
ā€œFriend?ā€
ā€œYes, please read it. Even though sheā€™s small, she put a great deal of effort into it for you.ā€
ā€œO-okayā€¦ā€

EDIT (09/10/16) - ā€œOh, another letter from this Tomo personā€¦I wonder what she looks like.ā€ ._.

EDIT (09/12/16) - ā€œTomoyo, what does this Tomo person look like?ā€
ā€œSheā€™s young and cute. Six years old, I think.ā€
ā€œWhy is a six-year-old writing to me? Donā€™t tell me itā€™s becauseā€¦ā€
ā€œWhatever perverted things youā€™re thinking about, itā€™s not true. Tomo is our friend. Thatā€™s all you need to know for now.ā€
ā€œUhā€¦sure.ā€ :confused:

EDIT (09/13/16) - ā€œHey, Tomoyo, whatā€™s a starfish?ā€
ā€œā€¦Youā€™re joking, right?ā€
ā€œYeah, sorry.ā€ ^^;
ā€œI miss Tomo. I really wish I could visit her right nowā€¦ā€
ā€œThen why donā€™t you?ā€
ā€œYouā€™re more important right now.ā€
ā€œAm I really that important to you?ā€
ā€œYouā€™ll understand soon. Iā€™m sure of it. For now, just keep reading her letters.ā€

EDIT (09/14/16) - ā€œSo many lettersā€¦I donā€™t know where to start. Maybe the most recent will do?ā€

EDIT (09/15/16) - ā€œWhoā€™s Fuko?ā€
ā€œā€¦Beats me. I donā€™t recall seeing any other girls in the village. But it looks like Tomoā€™s made a friend.ā€
ā€œSeems so. This Tomo girl really wants me to play with her for some reason. Maybe we should visit her?ā€
ā€œNo, not yet. For now, you need to rest. Iā€™ll go meet Tomo later.ā€
ā€œCan you give her a message, then?ā€
ā€œWhat?ā€
ā€œTell herā€¦Iā€™ll be there to play with her soon.ā€
ā€œā€¦Okay. Iā€™ll tell her.ā€
ā€œThank youā€¦ā€

EDIT (10/15/16) - ā€œThis Tomo girl sure has cute handwritingā€¦ā€
ā€œI know, right? Sheā€™s such a cute girl.ā€
ā€œI wonder if I really am her father, thoughā€¦I donā€™t remember ever getting married and having a kidā€¦ā€
ā€œā€¦ā€
ā€œā€¦Tomoyo?ā€
ā€œā€¦Itā€™s nothing.ā€
ā€œCome on, tell me. Am I really her father?ā€
ā€œā€¦No, youā€™re not. But even if she is not your real daughter, you still chose to raise her until her real mother could take care of her again. And those times were very happy.ā€
ā€œI wonder about thatā€¦I would like to meet her sometime soon.ā€
ā€œYou will. We promised we would.ā€
ā€œIs that so? Thenā€¦I look forward to it.ā€

EDIT (10/18/16) - ā€œDoes this kid seriously think General Winter is a person?ā€
ā€œHey, donā€™t make fun of her. Itā€™s like Santa Claus. Sheā€™ll learn to grow out of it eventually.ā€
ā€œBrrā€¦I doubt thatā€¦ā€
ā€œAre you cold? I can turn the temperature up if you want.ā€
ā€œN-no, Iā€™m fine. This is nothing compared to losing my memories.ā€
ā€œI can get you something hot to drink later if you need it.ā€
ā€œThank youā€¦hopefully I can see Tomo before I catch a cold.ā€
ā€œā€¦Yeah, hopefully.ā€

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A friend outside Kaza and I have done a thing where weā€™re writing more stories of an alternate world where thereā€™s a future ahead for Yumemi, and we give the Junker a nameā€¦Iā€™m wondering, if the mood ever strikes us to create some vignettes, if anyone here would actually be interested in reading them?

ā€¦boy, the story behind how this comes about is pretty outrageous, too and would make crazy fanfiction on its ownā€¦to preview the thoughts behind it, consider this.

In a world where the stars are in reach, but held out of the hands of many, can a dreamer still reach out to see them as more than pawns of the powerful?

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I also uploaded my Air fanfic Misuzu After Stories at Archive of Our Own.

http://archiveofourown.org/works/9656045/chapters/21812864

So I suddenly had a Rewrite fanfic in mind. I wanted to make a scenario based on this:

(all spoilers in this post is on Moon)

So my fanfic idea here is set in a dystopia centuries after a route like Kotoriā€™s, but I also like to include in the story that the world is running extremely low on aurora here, which is causing premature deaths everywhere. The protagonist is among them ā€“ in a very Key-like fashion, heā€™s terminally ill. Like Kotarou, he is simply looking for a simple yet fulfilling life, and somehow he ended up meeting and falling in love with a Holy Woman.

I still have yet to get to the specifics of how the story will go, but right now itā€™s just a matter of whether or not Iā€™ll actually write it. XD (It would also help if someone could point out if Iā€™m getting outright inconsistent with the canon.) Letā€™s see. :))

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I began writing a Kanon fanfiction a while back. It focuses on the character arcs but makes them have much darker endings. Iā€™m nowhere near a professional writer, so the writing can sometimes seem a bit ā€œmehā€, haha, but I wrote it to show my passion for the series.

So far there are three chapters, focusing on Makotoā€™s, Shioriā€™s, and Maiā€™s arcs. I have been working on Nayukiā€™s chapter, but Iā€™ve been going through major writerā€™s block with the story, and Iā€™m not sure if itā€™ll ever be completed. ^^

But ye, I would really like constructive feedback if youā€™re feeling kind. ^^

You can read it here:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12363913/1/Loss

Just a warning that there are some spoilers for the Kanon series, and that there is some violence; particularly in Maiā€™s chapter.

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Good idea!:yahaha:
Sakuya isnā€™t very developed in Rewrite.We only know that he was a rewriter, thatā€™s all. A fanfiction like this could add a real depth to Sakuya.

I know this will sound condescending, but I am asking out of curiosity. Why would you write fanfictions? Youā€™re not adding to the work itself.

Personally the only times Iā€™ve done so are in academic settings ā€” Capturing a type of story, or capturing an established setting, and imagining how it would be if alterations were made or if the scenario progressed. In this way fanfiction is not the study of literature but the study of a writer. Itā€™s an analysis.

An example I enjoy would be taking a rarely-mentioned character from a story and re-imagining said story in that characterā€™s mind. How would the writer alter his style to present the mind of this character? The world would still be the same in many ways, but the outlook would no doubt be changed. Thereā€™d be common ground and thereā€™d be differences. How would this outcome differ from if you wrote a similar scenario from scratch as yourself? What can those differences tell you?

While many authors follow this approach (explaining why many recognized authors have worked on what could be called fanfiction) it is hardly mainstream. I imagine most of the fan-fiction out there stems from a simple set of things: A lack of originality, a burst of inspiration, an ideal, and a love of a story. They just like headcanons.

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If I were to do it, which Iā€™ve considered some times, it would be just cause I have fun writing, and if I already like a universe but think that it still has more potential than the one that the original writers used, why not give it a try? It similar to musicians writing arranges. They wonā€™t add many new things, but it still creates something slightly different and the arranger or other people that might come across the score enjoy it.

I do agree with Takafumi on the lack of originality though, although sometimes you just want to write a short story and canā€™t spend a lot of time explaining the world that itā€™s taking part in in detail.

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I donā€™t write fics that often, but thereā€™s a certain kind of fun in wanting to explore on some aspects of the story that it didnā€™t expand that much on. Like if I like a story enough, Iā€™d start having ideas on ā€œwhat-ifsā€ that Iā€™ll have an urge to write about. For example, what if Riki also had a route with Suginami? Itā€™s an interesting idea that LB! didnā€™t explore about. So there might be fans who would want to write fics about them, and other curious fellows would actively seek fics about them.

Also, ideas can also spark more ideas too, and I guess thatā€™s how it starts for most people.

Also, Rule 34.

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This is a Kurugaya origin theory. (it kinda got long).

Kurugaya had two parents, both brilliant. Her father was a champion martial artist and the her Mother a world renowned musician.

Her mother and father wanted Kurugaya to be the best so they persuaded her to do her best in everything. From her childhood Kurugaya was expected to be perfect in everything. Her parents only showed two emotions to Kurugaya. Whenever she did something disapproving her parents showed disappointment and whenever she did good they merely acknowledge it with an okay or a nod of head.

These robotic expression of yes and no was all she had in her childhood. She never interacted with other children and never understood them. Due to this she became emotionless.

One day she and her parents came to a small town when she was 10. There was a carnival nearby, her parents left her there while they attended some business.

She was loitering around for a while to pass time when she found someone. A boy was trying to climb a tree.

ā€œWhat are you doing?ā€ she asked him while being expressionless.

ā€œOhā€¦ Waaaa!ā€ the boy fell as he turned ā€œYou surprised me.ā€

Seeing as there was no expression from her the boy replied to her question ā€œWhen i was counting my money and fell my wallet flew from my hand and got stuck up thereā€.

Kurugaya looked up. Surely there was a wallet there.

ā€œI was finally going to the carnival but nowā€¦ā€ the boy looked dejected.

Kurugaya didnā€™t know why but she had an urge to help him. She jumped up and broke the branch holding the wallet. The wallet fell and the boy grabbed it.

ā€œThanks. You really saved me,ā€ that was the first time someone thanked kurugaya. A smile threatened on her face. She felt her first emotion happiness that time.

ā€œHey do you want to go to the carnival? Itā€™ll be fun,ā€ the boy asked her.

ā€œMe Iā€™m not sure, my parents areā€¦ā€

ā€œI can pay for your rides too. I have enough money and this way i can pay you back, after all i wouldnā€™t have been able to go if it hadnā€™t been because of you,ā€

ā€œButā€¦ā€

ā€œCome onā€¦ā€ the boy pulled her hand but for some reason she didnā€™t show any resistance.

They road many rides any played many games on the stall in the carnival. It was the first day kurugaya had any fun. Soon the evening came and so did the time for Kurugaya to leave.

ā€œI had a lot of fun with you today, thank you,ā€

ā€œUmā€¦ yesā€ Kurugaya was feeling strange, she didnā€™t feel like this any other time.

ā€œHey. You look bad is something the matter?ā€ the boy asked her.

ā€œNothing, i was feeling very good before but now that weā€™re separating i feelā€¦ odd.ā€

The boy stared at her for a minute and then said ā€œwait here for a moment.ā€ he said and ran off. He returned in a few minutes with something.

ā€œA ribbon?ā€ in his hands lay a yellow ribbon.

ā€œYeah, you know you looked sad at the prospect of us going away so i brought this.ā€

ā€œBecause i looked sad?.ā€

ā€œYeah, my mom told me that yellow colour is for happiness and hope. I am giving you this because i want you to become happy again and also you can hold hope that we meet each other again.ā€

The small act of kindness. It was something foreign for kurugaya. She didnā€™t know how to react.

ā€œShould i tie it in your hair?ā€ Kurugaya just nodded. The boy clumsily tied it on the left part of her hair.

ā€œSorry Iā€™ve never tied a ribbon in a girlā€™s hair before.ā€ it was time for goodbye now ā€œIā€™ll see you again bye-bye.ā€ his words were like a promise to kurugaya.

The boy said and ran away in the drowning sunset.

That day kurugaya felt happiness when she helped him. Fun when they spent time together. Sadness when they separated andā€¦ an unknown emotion.

Those emotions were now only left in Kurugayaā€™s memory. She tried to replicate them but she couldnā€™t. So she put on fake emotions and tried to recreated them with other people, but they were always either kids who saw her as odd or those whom she didnā€™t had interest in.

A desire was born in her heart now, That she can put away these fake emotions and once again experience the real oneā€™s. It was only fulfilled when she met the Little busters.

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After reading this post, Iā€™ve decided: this isnā€™t a ridiculous theory! This is actually some pretty decent fan fiction!

And so Iā€™ve moved it here, where it belongs :umu:

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So, I decided that I ought to release chapters of this as I work on it.

Itā€™s chapter 1 of Yumemi And Friends, my big wacky science fiction take on Planetarian skewed slightly sideways. Welcome to what happened when I and a friend decided that Yumemi would be a dead ringer for the Abh from Crest of the Stars, and it went from thereā€¦